Ahhh, this took me nearly three weeks...which, really, isn't long, but man it felt like it ^^ Probably one of the most detailed pieces I've ever done
I like this a lot but there should be more influence on the picture by the sun and more shadows cast by the fence. Also I'm not sure if I'm satisfied with the people or not...
Well, seems to me that you already know the things that could have improved it a tiny bit more, to me this is awesome. I'm impressed of how much time you put into this picture and the outcome is great! Wonderful job tabb!
-- I wanna have wings, they are so nice and fluffy n___n
WOOO, alright, so I finally got around to do this.
Before I get to the critique, all I can say is that the detail is awesomely awesome. Wow, once again, I can't even believe how much time you would have spent on that. It's very very colourful - which is always awesome.
The only thing I can see is that the perspective is kinda wonky. I don't have any helpful tips regarding that, though, because, face it, I can't do perspective either. D: You could always read those tutorials though. Those should/is suppose to help. Oh, and that the colour of the sky is a bit dark, especially around the sun. The sun's virtually white in the sky, right? So the area surrounding it would be white.
But yush, kudos to you and your awesome pic.
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I wish that I was funny I wish that I was creative I wish that I was interesting
...And maybe then I can think of something to put here
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Lace your fingers in mine, and together- we'll turn our backs to the world.
the warm colours and the details, just Great!!
-blush-
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Before I get to the critique, all I can say is that the detail is awesomely awesome.
The only thing I can see is that the perspective is kinda wonky. I don't have any helpful tips regarding that, though, because, face it, I can't do perspective either. D:
You could always read those tutorials though. Those should/is suppose to help.
Oh, and that the colour of the sky is a bit dark, especially around the sun. The sun's virtually white in the sky, right? So the area surrounding it would be white.
But yush, kudos to you and your awesome pic.
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I wish that I was funny
I wish that I was creative
I wish that I was interesting
...And maybe then I can think of something to put here
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